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Prussia smiled and kissed the blonde again, this time more passionately, threading his hands through the other nation's silky golden hair as Canada pulled him down to straddle his lap.

While running his hands trough Canada's hair, he must have accidentally pulled on his curl, and... Everyone knows what happened next...
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When Prussia brushed his fingers against Canada's curl, Canada froze, causing Gil to pull away.

"Vat's wrong, Birdie?" he asked.

"N-nothing... It's just... My curl..." the smaller blonde blushed deeply.

"Vat about your curl?" he asked, running his finger along it again. Canada let out a strangled moan, and Prussia (who was still sitting on Canada's lap), felt the effect his playing with the curl had on Canada. "Kesesesese... So zat's vat it does... In zat case!" He gave the curl a sharp tug.

Canada uttered a slightly animalistic cry and bucked his hips under Prussia, pulling him down to kiss him roughly. Prussia responded by nipping at Canada's bottom lip, asking for entry. Canada obliged, opening his mouth and letting Prussia dominate. Prussia explored Canada's mouth, enjoying the taste of the maple syrup from the pancakes.

When they broke apart for air, Prussia said, panting, "Couch. Now." Canada nodded. Prussia stood up, then lifted Canada up, who wrapped his legs around the albino's waist. Prussia carried the shorter nation to the couch, then laid down, straddling him once more. An idea struck him. He leaned up and started sucking on the curl, playing with it with his tongue. Canada moaned loudly and bucked his hips again, arching his back and fumbling with the button's on Prussia's shirt. Prussia abandoned the curl for a moment, helping the blonde remove his shirt, then removing Canada's shirt. He leaned down to kiss him again, his hand going up to play with the curl again.

At that moment, the door burst open. "Yo, Cana-- WOAH, DUDE, WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING TO MATTIE?!?!" America yelled. Canada and Prussia  sprang apart, the former blushing heavily, both of them panting. America was staring at them, wide-eyed.

"Oh, hi Al..." Canada managed to get out between breaths. Prussia waved slightly.

"... Prussia, what the heck?! Since when... Are you two even going out?"

Prussia looked at Canada. "I guess ve are now, ja?"

Canada smiled. "Oui."
This is a continuation of my first PruCan story, "If One Would...": pokerose.deviantart.com/art/If…

GAH IT'S SO HORRIBLE!!! :iconitabbyhorrorplz: I mean... It's really badly written... And of course America has to come and ruin the moment... -_-" But he only came (tee-hee!) because I just... I'm sorry, I just couldn't write any more... This is the closest I've ever gotten to writing a lemon/smut... And its for Prucan, one of my most favorite pairings~!! :iconcannotevenplz: I think I'm just gonna go die in a corner now, da? Thank you for reading! Please comment, and if you like it, favorite it! :) *goes and hides in corner*

Edit: If I get, let's say... 10 comments asking for a third part, I will write a continuation of this continuation. Ok? So if anyone wants a part three, just ask. :)

Edit 2: Hey all! I've gotten so many requests for a third part, and I'm so psyched that you all really liked this! I have a part three written up in a notebook, and it's about halfway typed onto my computer, so I will have it up soon! I'll try to get it up before Thanksgiving. I'm just trying really hard not to get caught by my dad with it... ^^;
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:iconneko-lucifer:
Neko-Lucifer Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  New member
ALFRED. WHY. PLZ. NO.
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XSilverSiren Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
It's really good! Are you going to do a third?
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XDInvaderKay07XD Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
So freakin' kawii~!!! ALFRED WILL PAY!!!!!
I CHOOSE YOU RUSSIA!!!!!
~XD
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Wafflepigs Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
Me: *walks in on Gil and Mattie* sorry! *runs out but actually ran into the kitchen* *secretly starts recording lol I'm a secret pervert*
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TeenageFangirl13 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Student General Artist
...Could I have the tape?^////////^
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:iconwafflepigs:
Wafflepigs Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015
*shhh* I'll make a copy 4 u
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ramendangosenbei Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
Don't start recording without me - runs into kitchen and records-
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:iconwafflepigs:
Wafflepigs Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015
Lolololo
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BlackRaven7372 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Student General Artist
America:*thinks- The what the fudge just happened here?!?!?!*

Me :*laughing really hard at America*
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Purpleorchids869 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Student General Artist
IT WAS GOING SO WELL!!!! MY FEELS WERE GOING OVER THE ROOF AND WHAT HAPPENED???!!! THE HERO HAPPENED DANG NABBIT!!!! MY HORMONES WERE GOING ALL OVER THE PLACE AND HE BASICALLY SMOSHED IT!!!
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kaorusgirlfriend Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Loved it <3 and surprisingly enough, Canada is taller than Prussia. Just thought I'd put that out there x3
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Pitchblackofnight456 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
I acutely liked this and I don't think it's  horrible I think it's great I don't understand why anyone would call  the story horrible  
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PokeRose Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. :)
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JINX991 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*grabs Hungary's frying pan* GODDAMNIT ALFRED!

Alfred: c-come on dudeet i-i didnt know they where in there *backs away slowly*

*spins frying pan in my hand* run.

Alfred: *runs as fast as possible*


ANYWAY~ good story loved it  
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PokeRose Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Run for your life, Al. Grow wings and fly if need be.


Thank you very much! :D
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to hit Alfred for ruining the atmosphere
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Tieico Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Alfred! You stupid cock block... I want to smack you... wait I can! Thank you power of Enter, Texas!

Regardless, is there going to be a part 3? Peace out!
-Tieico

P.S. This is an awesome story!

Peace out!
-T
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PokeRose Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There is going to be a part three. I have it written up, but I need to finish typing it, and seem to have lost the notebook that it was in... Also, deviantArt is a little bit tricky for my computer at the moment, so I'm doing my best to get it up as soon as I can.

P.S. Thank you!
Prussia: Well, of course it's awesome! /I'm/ in it!
me: Shut up, Gil...
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Tieico Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!

I can relate to the "Loosing the note book" I lost three stories that way. Don't worry! I'm sure you'll find it!
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PokeRose Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I keep losing my notebooks, but then they randomly pop up from time to time. :)
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GamerGirl0002 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
WHAT THE FUCK
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:iconpokerose:
PokeRose Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What...?
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GamerGirl0002 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
he he he *sweat drop*
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magalia323 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
DAMN YOU ALFRED YOU RUINED SEXY TIME OF ONE OF MY OTPS- Now you go over to Iggy's house and fix that. Ohonhonhon
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PokeRose Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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dragonmastrcrashrokz Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014   Artist
Goddamn it, Alfred! Y YOU RUIN PRUCAN SEXYTIME *shot* XD
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:iconpokerose:
PokeRose Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Because I felt the need to stop myself...
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dragonmastrcrashrokz Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014   Artist
Lol meaniepants XD (JK xD)
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PokeRose Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD There will be a part three coming out soon... I just need to type it up and then wait for either a chance to upload it at the library or for dad to remove the blocks on my computer...
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dragonmastrcrashrokz Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014   Artist
Huzzah!~ :D
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PokeRose Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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Jackholereba12 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
and America learned to knock that day.
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:iconpokerose:
PokeRose Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Once would hope... Although probably not.
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Comicfangirl7 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Part 3! Part 3!
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Shuduhpoke7 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist
OnO I WANTED IT TO CONINUE!!!! *cries*
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PokeRose Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There is a part three being typed. It is finished, I just need to type it up...
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ThatPruCanFangirl Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HURRRYYY UPPPPP~ ;`;
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AliceIsAwesome1 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Needs a part 3. Please
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:iconpokerose:
PokeRose Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have finished writing it, I just need to finish typing and post it.
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Cessepool Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
GOD DAME IT AMERICA YOU COOK BLOCKER. um can I request a 3rd part, with shall I dare say a lemon?
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:iconpokerose:
PokeRose Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I actually have it already written, and half of it is typed up, but I'm having problems getting online to finish typing it...
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Cessepool Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*mumbling Dumble Dora the explora* DEMONS FROM HELL I CALL THE TO HELP WRITE PART 3!!!no not you russia.
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PokeRose Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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Pixiedust1120 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Me: What the Hell!? Alfred, you and I need to go talk to Hungry! *pops up from behind Canada's couch*
Prussia: Vhat ze hell!? Vhy vere you behind Mattie's couch!? *pushes Canada behind back*
Me: I get yaoi stuff Hungry and Japan. You guys just happen to be next on my list. *shrugs casually*
America: Dude, how did you get in here????? *confused out of mind*
Me: That's classified. *cross room to America* Now then let's go talk to Hungry. *smiles creepily*
Canada: Um... What, eh?
Me: Oh, nothing forget Al and I were here. Have a nice day. *drags America out by the hair on the back of his neck*
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FallAutumns Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG!!!!! Are you another one of Hungary and Japan's ninja fangirls?! BROFIST!~!!!!
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Pixiedust1120 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Would you be so kind as to get the yaoi for me while Hungry and I talk to America? Here you can barrow the camera Japan gave me.
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FallAutumns Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconimaninjaplz: Yes! *dives behind the couch*
:iconprussiawtfplz: WTF?!
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Pixiedust1120 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Thank you good citizen. When your done, please report to Hungry and Japan.
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FallAutumns Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yessir/ma'am!!
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Pixiedust1120 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
*salutes and walks of dragging America*
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