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Prussia smiled and kissed the blonde again, this time more passionately, threading his hands through the other nation's silky golden hair as Canada pulled him down to straddle his lap.

While running his hands trough Canada's hair, he must have accidentally pulled on his curl, and... Everyone knows what happened next...
When Prussia brushed his fingers against Canada's curl, Canada froze, causing Gil to pull away.

"Vat's wrong, Birdie?" he asked.

"N-nothing... It's just... My curl..." the smaller blonde blushed deeply.

"Vat about your curl?" he asked, running his finger along it again. Canada let out a strangled moan, and Prussia (who was still sitting on Canada's lap), felt the effect his playing with the curl had on Canada. "Kesesesese... So zat's vat it does... In zat case!" He gave the curl a sharp tug.

Canada uttered a slightly animalistic cry and bucked his hips under Prussia, pulling him down to kiss him roughly. Prussia responded by nipping at Canada's bottom lip, asking for entry. Canada obliged, opening his mouth and letting Prussia dominate. Prussia explored Canada's mouth, enjoying the taste of the maple syrup from the pancakes.

When they broke apart for air, Prussia said, panting, "Couch. Now." Canada nodded. Prussia stood up, then lifted Canada up, who wrapped his legs around the albino's waist. Prussia carried the shorter nation to the couch, then laid down, straddling him once more. An idea struck him. He leaned up and started sucking on the curl, playing with it with his tongue. Canada moaned loudly and bucked his hips again, arching his back and fumbling with the button's on Prussia's shirt. Prussia abandoned the curl for a moment, helping the blonde remove his shirt, then removing Canada's shirt. He leaned down to kiss him again, his hand going up to play with the curl again.

At that moment, the door burst open. "Yo, Cana-- WOAH, DUDE, WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING TO MATTIE?!?!" America yelled. Canada and Prussia  sprang apart, the former blushing heavily, both of them panting. America was staring at them, wide-eyed.

"Oh, hi Al..." Canada managed to get out between breaths. Prussia waved slightly.

"... Prussia, what the heck?! Since when... Are you two even going out?"

Prussia looked at Canada. "I guess ve are now, ja?"

Canada smiled. "Oui."
This is a continuation of my first PruCan story, "If One Would...":…

GAH IT'S SO HORRIBLE!!! :iconitabbyhorrorplz: I mean... It's really badly written... And of course America has to come and ruin the moment... -_-" But he only came (tee-hee!) because I just... I'm sorry, I just couldn't write any more... This is the closest I've ever gotten to writing a lemon/smut... And its for Prucan, one of my most favorite pairings~!! :iconcannotevenplz: I think I'm just gonna go die in a corner now, da? Thank you for reading! Please comment, and if you like it, favorite it! :) *goes and hides in corner*

Edit: If I get, let's say... 10 comments asking for a third part, I will write a continuation of this continuation. Ok? So if anyone wants a part three, just ask. :)

Edit 2: Hey all! I've gotten so many requests for a third part, and I'm so psyched that you all really liked this! I have a part three written up in a notebook, and it's about halfway typed onto my computer, so I will have it up soon! I'll try to get it up before Thanksgiving. I'm just trying really hard not to get caught by my dad with it... ^^;
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kaorusgirlfriend Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Loved it <3 and surprisingly enough, Canada is taller than Prussia. Just thought I'd put that out there x3
Pitchblackofnight456 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
I acutely liked this and I don't think it's  horrible I think it's great I don't understand why anyone would call  the story horrible  
PokeRose Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. :)
JINX991 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*grabs Hungary's frying pan* GODDAMNIT ALFRED!

Alfred: c-come on dudeet i-i didnt know they where in there *backs away slowly*

*spins frying pan in my hand* run.

Alfred: *runs as fast as possible*

ANYWAY~ good story loved it  
PokeRose Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Run for your life, Al. Grow wings and fly if need be.

Thank you very much! :D
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to hit Alfred for ruining the atmosphere
Tieico Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Alfred! You stupid cock block... I want to smack you... wait I can! Thank you power of Enter, Texas!

Regardless, is there going to be a part 3? Peace out!

P.S. This is an awesome story!

Peace out!
PokeRose Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There is going to be a part three. I have it written up, but I need to finish typing it, and seem to have lost the notebook that it was in... Also, deviantArt is a little bit tricky for my computer at the moment, so I'm doing my best to get it up as soon as I can.

P.S. Thank you!
Prussia: Well, of course it's awesome! /I'm/ in it!
me: Shut up, Gil...
Tieico Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

I can relate to the "Loosing the note book" I lost three stories that way. Don't worry! I'm sure you'll find it!
PokeRose Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I keep losing my notebooks, but then they randomly pop up from time to time. :)
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